Monday, March 5, 2012

Abstract vs. Concrete

Today we discussed the wonder of words and how to use them effectively. Words are what you're using to sell your story and so they need to be concise and focused so you don't distract your audience. Abstract words are concepts, which are often vague. Concrete words are illustrations which help your audience connect to your story  by painting a vivid picture. Find words that tap into the five senses...

Here's an easy example of concrete words: The Fourth of July
* Fireworks
* The smell of gunpowder
* The boom and crackle of fireworks in the distance
* The American flag
* Patriotism-- that's actually abstract.... Proud to be an American?
* Drunkenly singing the National Anthem
* Sparklers
* Grilling hotdogs and hamburgers
* Parade music (you know what I'm talking about...the John Philip Sousa type stuff)

No comments:

Post a Comment